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All it takes is just one person
To change another person's life.

Just like it only takes one knife
To end that persons life.

You should think before
You tell someone something like that.
Had to get it off my chest.
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FracturedCarousel May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the last stanza <3 This is what makes poetry perfect.
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FracturedCarousel May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :]
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FracturedCarousel May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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FracturedCarousel May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't you 'k' me D:
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:icondahvievanityrules:
OH I K'D YOU BABY, YOU BETTER BELIEVE I K'D YOU!!...
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I don't get the last sanza?
The first where really well thought out, then the last one dosen't really fit!
Get me?
It's good, but if u think of more i'd b good 2 put either b4 or after that last stanza :)
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:icondahvievanityrules:
IT'S MY OWN EMOTIONS AND I CHOSE TO WRITE THE LAST STANZA THAT WAY BECAUSE IT MEANT SOMETHING TO ME. You'd bloody understand if you were me, and I didn't under any ccircumstances write this for your intertainment! I wrote this because this is how I feel. He had no clue what mess he made by sayin just 3 little words. that's what the last stanza means, honey.
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